Very Good Story ← Back

Let’s find where your story gets lost.

Story Strategy Call · 30 minutes · free

Payton Minzenmayer
We’ll look at how your company lands with people outside your world. If there’s a fit, I’ll show you how I’d fix it. Either way, you leave with the map.
Payton Minzenmayer, founder story editor

Answer 5 quick questions to see times

About a minute. It helps me come to the call ready.

Add your name.

Add a valid email.

Add your company’s website.

One full sentence, please (15+ characters).

Who isn’t getting it right now?

Pick at least one.

Stage

Pick one.

If this call goes well, are you ready to invest in fixing it in the next 60 days?

Pick one.

For faith-tech and AI founders tired of translating their company for investors and hires.

You’ll leave with

  • A one-page Story Gap Map
  • How a stranger hears your company today
  • A sharper one-liner and the first fix

Yours to keep, either way.

Two founding client spots are open this fall.